I was listening to “Disturbia” by Rihanna when I wrote this.

I was listening to “Disturbia” by Rihanna when I wrote this.

i like this. its good. keep up the awesomeness! :D

this is good. i like it. :) keep writing like this and you’ll be the envy of everybody.

Thanks so much!

Very nice detail!

And it doesn’t seemed forced, either. You give an image without simply explaining what things look like.

But I can’t say I’m a fan of using abbreviations in ficlets… w/o the abbreviations would be better. :)

Sorry, the character limit stuck it to me again :P