whoa, racy! and a great twist ending!

Sweet.
I like the emotion and descriptions.
In the office though? Little weird to imagine co-workers making out over the coffee machine. Unless, {scans the article} No, this wasn’t at Grey’s Anatomy.
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And for the love of grammar, please put breaks in between the paragraphs. Please?
LoA.

A break costs 2 characters, which i didn’t have .. i had to edit alot to get under 1024.

And the idea is not that they’d make out—just a dark corridor smooch.. but – that’s left up to the reader to determine what’s realistic.

wow, what an ending.

Didn’t see that one coming, even though it hit like a truck.