This story could very easily be my wifes. Nice way with words.

This is really sad…

Unfortunately, too many children, and even young adults, these days feel the loss of a father or mother…

Very well written, although you might want to check your grammar, and separate the story into paragraphs with double-return.

Thank you for reading my first ficlet and for the advice. It means a lot to me.

Thank you for reading my first ficlet and for the advice. It means a lot to me.

Thank you for reading my first ficlet and for the advice. It means a lot to me.

Thank you for reading my first ficlet and for the advice. It means a lot to me.

Thank you for reading my first ficlet and for the advice. It means a lot to me.

okay, for some strange reason my first comment is on here 5 times! Sorry.

That happened to one of my best friends, so I know how sad it can be…very good though

and welcome to ficlets =]

Welcome to ficlets! This was a WONDERFUL ficlet. Even though it is quite sad, I can relate. This is actually the story of my life. I really liked this and I hope you write more [: Great job!