niiiice!

Thanks! :)

ooo, i like it. and i like how it’s a mix of stream of consciousness and like, past tense. =)

that is a really unique poetry-like prose-esque style you have i like it you officially rox

sounds like a far-fetched dream lover, who probably won’t show up to sweep her off her feet. :)

this was really well done – and i loved the ending …
Thanks for entering, i truely enjoyed it.