beautiful

Yay, another chance to make use of those ambiguous statements! I got to use the holding of the future for my sequel this time!

This story is a good example of the mind filling in certain blanks not described. By use of a few choice words, the author describes the scene thoroughly enough to get the point across without wasting space.

Good stuff.

“i can hear you whispering to my heart,
even though your lips are sealed.”
I love with my heart and soul, this part.
i feel like crying

This is so beautiful. There’s not really much else I can say.