woah, what?

This one is a bit confusing, I’m glad you told us what age Solomon was and set up the epic with the tale of the Riddle Queen. It was a rough switch from “breathed air into clouds, to invented riddles” I think you need an “and” in there. :) Okay so when her beloved says the “if they eat of the tree” line, what does she say? You started out with telling us she would say something, but yet she doesn’t. I’m looking forward to the unsolvable riddle though! I can see her wrath and determination. Solomon was wise!

hmmmmmmmmm

Agree again. Could be made a little clearer.