AMAZING ! i gotta say, that was beast! Cracka! I no it seems wierd that i’m commenting my own story(READ PROFILE )

the truth is! I wrote it! Haha yes, I, N555champ, am the bomb diggadee that wrote this epic story.

the ultimate gangsta! I’d hate to see him in a good mood, let alone a bad one….or a REALLY bad one…

that’s kinda really sad but funny somehow too

youch!! brutul. but well written 4.5 stars

Yeah, so sad! The pooooor little girl! I wanted to jump into my computer and help her when I read that! AHHHHHH !

Last sentence was nice.