Methodical and careful telling in a very quiet way the very dramatic events. I mean by that that the writing is over-done or too theatrical, which suits quite well the humble, working-man situation you’ve described. Well done. And thanks for entering the challenge.

Wow. That was definitely a disaster averted.

whew! And no one will know except a trucker and a few lone drivers late to work.. lol! That was close!

Great unsung heroism story. Like THX , I lied the style in which it was told: plain and simple, detachedly reporting the dramatic events.

*liked. Yeah, I’ve got to correct myself.

The style was smooth and seemless, with just the right amount of verve at the appropriate moment. 5 stars.