I smile, I love the waitress with her “sage” advice. I wonder how many husbands she’s had.. I’m sure she’d got a story for every cup of coffee!
Could be a couple of messages in this one, and certainly the scene is one a lot of us would-be writers can relate to.
I like the old cliché of the world-wise diner waitress.
My favorite line is the “get lost in the past, and it takes a slap from the present ta bring me back!” 5 stars.
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