Great work, very real. I can relate in a way. Inspired by Blue October?

yepp. love that song.

I swear I’ve listened to that song a hundred times. Great story too btw, I understand the feelings there.

I love the song. The same goes for the story. I swear the song is the most played in my iTunes.

AWE THAT IS SO CUTE ! I LURVE IT !

really good- really really good! i luved it with like the passion!
lol

really great..

Eerie, but very real. Excellent.

Very good tone, and I like how we can infer so much about what has happened before and what will happen next. Fun.

Pretty cool story!