ooohhh wwoowww cant wait for the next one, great prologue, ugh it hurts that u havent sequeled yet!

Well, well, look who’s little mr. impatient.

Perfection! Beautiful little twist.

You know what’s funny? As I was reading this, I was wondering just how bad I could screw up their lives with a murder in the sequel…. You beat me to it!

Well, I sequeled….

Hope you don’t mind too much, but the temptation overwhelmed me!

I was about to yawn….. until I read the last sentence. Nice hook.