Oooh a note! (he was mainly a college professor)

I like this chapter! Are you in middle school like your character? [=

Aw, the note! Great series so far!

This is good, but should be broken into paragraphs.

off to read more. great job. i really like the overall tone of your writing, very bittersweet. like dark chocolate without any sugar.

i like this. i think punkin described it really well, so i’m not going to elaborate much more.

aw, i love it.
good job.

aw, i love this. this is great =]

aww..really nice relationship betwee essie and her dad

“pleased as pie” that expression always makes me smile :)

love the last name

A busy dad and a cool name.