Comments on Residing Dreams (Chapter 4) by SaveTheUnicorns

Mistress Elsha Hawk

good monologue, though I kind of figured this out from the first few :) Let’s get to the mystery of Pleasantville, i mean, there is a mystery coming, right?
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:33.
howhardlifeis

=) I really like this. I agree with the above.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:33.
Writer4Life00nj

Yeah totally [= Keep writing!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:33.
Freedom

I agree too. Reading on…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:33.
Freedom

I agree too. Reading on…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:34.
Freedom

I agree too. Reading on…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:34.
Smile4life!

oh this is so good
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:34.
BrokenAngel

I like the last little sentence the most actually. It’s short and sweet and a little blunt.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:34.
moonlight_girl

i like it so far reading on to see more
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:34.
(:Shay:)luvs_ashleyparkerangel:)

mm..nice twist..I like the last sentence as well
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:34.
BernerOberland

Not having a mom can be tough. Glad you avoided the usual orphan cliches
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:23:34.