Whoa, that was intense and very sad. Very well written; the paragraphs might want to be split into smaller ones though. But overall, I love how you made the point that she does the same thing everyday and in the same order. It gives us the hint for the ending, that she was going to change it. Great job :]
Beautifully written. You did a great job of addressing the monotony that every one of us feels with our daiy routines. Though not everyone chooses that kind of escape, you did a good job of portraying the intenser side of the pain of monotony.
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