oh oh, now you did it. You’re going to have to sequel this, so we’ll all know who did it.

very nice! A little fact from Wild Wild West, (well that’s where I heard it) and a detective who talks to the body! It’s cool where everyone is taking this eye picture!

awesome story.
it really felt like i was right there, watching him. and also like a horror movie, lol. keep up the great work [;

yeah, i agree with suspense. very beautiful!

Oh wow! This is really great! If eyes could talk… what would mine say? hmmm
LoA

Wow. That’s intense, man! Bravisimo!

Intense is a good word. I just loved reading that.

Very chilling, and a little CSI , though that’s more just because they’ve done the crime scene thing so much that they’ve sort of claimed it. Touching in its tragedy.

Very very creeping, chills down your spine type of thing. I love it! Thanks for entering.

Strange… I really liked this! Amazing how one little picture can inspire so many stories…