Awww… That was touching. The descriptions were good, and you made them really come to life!

you did really make it come alive! happy ending, aww!
LoA

I love the happy yet sad ending. And I agree with OrangeOreos, great descriptions. Thanks for entering.

All right! Now we have the beginning of a story. What happens next?

sniffle awww, how sad. But very touching all the while.

awe! this is just amazing =) nice descriptions and a good flow to it.

I agree with the others; great descriptions, and I love the bittersweet ending. Nice job!
LoA

Ooh, dark interpretation of the photo. Exquisitely painful bit of story.

Absolutely gorgeous. Nice interpretation, too