Nice. might wanna mark it mature. ewwy blood!*

Yikes! It was probably his ex wife. Good Job.

there isn’t any sex, drugs, or profanity.

Blood isnt mature…

Actually, it pretty much is.

Ew, ripped out his Adam’s Apple? Creative and… well, bloody! Nice job.

the beast is obviously male, with cub scouting memories… Very gory.

haha the adam’s apple is sort of an inside joke…

I believe Stovohobo has removed the Adam’s Apple from my throat before.

huh. not sure what to think of this, i mean, i think you did a good job writing it but its not a very interesting subject for me only because i dont really like gory things. and i kinda wish it had a different name other than the beast because it seems….. i dont want to say obnoxious but its oddly… weird. and kinda boring. sorry… i might have used like, it

And don’t think I won’t do it again.

Umm…. ok ms./mr. sunshine,

1. I’ll make sure never to write something gory or bloody ever again… just for you.

2. I called the Beast IT plenty of times, I just couldn’t bold it because I didn’t have enough room.

3. I’m so sorry that I inconvienienced you.

The horror..love the humor throughout.. the beast being a former cub scout itself.. and the leader trying to make the tree sound interesting priceless.