Damn. I haven’t been able to log into Ficlets for DAYS . hugs Ficlets I’ve missed you!!!!

that was dark and evil! BTW I hate those songs! Ugh! your story fits them well!

A bit ominous there, and that is a peppy little song about teenage death. Ficlets missed you too.

Almost lulled me to sleep until your character danced around the bloody body. Nice hook.

Nice set up and payoff, leading us down one path and then taking a sudden left turn at the end…

omg! totally not expecting that! very nice job =)

Oh my… I loved twisted things like this. The last line made me giggle, as well.

Not expecting the ending but it was amazing. I actually like I was laughing like OrangeOreos to keep from imaging that. Chills. But great job on this. So, so ominous.

And I hate those kind of songs too.

Twist is right. Wow. What an ending, only made possible by the stellar setup.

Thanks for comments everyone. Extremely irritated at having to create a new account to get into Ficlets (even more that I had to use shudder AOL to do it.) Been trying for days and days to get in here :( Don’t want to start over :( Wish AOL would get someone back in charge here so there’s a contact to fix the broken stuff now Awesome Kevin is gone.

Of course I winge about it, and the next day suddenly I can log in and now I look like a whiny bitch :) Oh well, at least it worked this time.

Well at least now you have your backup identity…