Comments on A Memory, a Mommy, and a Moment Missed (by both VideogameBoy and Elsha together) by Mistress Elsha Hawk

Kermitgorf

This needs to be sequeled.. its so reallife.. the child is precious…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:29:30.
Kermitgorf

This needs to be sequeled.. its so reallife.. the child is precious…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:29:30.
Wyatt Aapr

Nice slice of americana. If you don’t sequel it i will. ;-)
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:29:30.
Algai 'd' Aman

I’d like to see a sequel as well. This perfectly captures a 5 year old’s priorities. Nice job.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:29:31.
ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

yes.. very nice piece… and i agree with Skermitgorf: Very real.. i can hear my own son talking as i read this…
Very fun piece..
I think you’ll find many sequeling :) hehee.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:29:31.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

I’d have to wait for the five year old to get a creative whim again… I hope many do sequel! I loved reading the sequels of my last MOM ficlet. (the one where I took the kids to the grocery store if you remember that)
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:29:31.
OrangeOreos

Aw… Little kids make the world go around.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:29:31.