there is a nice beat to it. me likey.

Awesome.

lol i love the title. This is really good

Thanks for the comments. It didn’t rhyme as much the first time I wrote it but then I read Dr. Seuss…kind of hard not to rhyme after reading that, lol.

I like this. It very deep and true, in a way. And it rhymes, but not in an over done Dr. Seuss way. Good!

Hmm, I thought I had already commented on this one…
Anyway, great job. The last to lines were grand.

*two