funny onomatopia (is that how it’s spelled?) anyway, funny use of sound effects. Nice light little story with some laughs thrown in. I laughed at the “fiyah” line.

I like the teaser ending, definitely saying there are more misadventures to come.

hmm, a new Kelsie, and has Trevor had any more….experience…since elementary school, I mean he could have a rep by high school if he’s been frisky in middle school… I like the way he’s scoping out the girls. I envisioned him as a playa, so play it up!

oh and he’s really smart, a charmer too, makes things more fun… just so’s you know… hmm, this begs for a sequel!

This doesn’t beg.
It screams.
I love this little series :)
5*

…”fiyah”? i laughed hysterically at that just because i know you would never intentionally say that.