Hah! Very nice little zig-zag in the plot there :)

Lovely little twist there.

Well done!

I liked it.

Good one

Wha….? This makes no sense.

keep writting storys

Great Job!!

It was well-written, but I don’t understand the resolution.

I luh-ove it!!

i like this one this was hot

I like the unexpected plot turn. Lol. Very interesting perspective.

Clearly a bridge between the past and the future, but well done.

umm yea
im npt totally getting it bu the imagery is great

ohhhhhhh
now i get it

Philip seems more devious than earlier.