very dramatic! why doesn’t she love him? or is this just too much for her, the freezing water and all? sequel!

I heard his familier face Only mistake I found. Might want to fix that. Anyways, this is really good. I love ficlets that I don’t know how to interpret, and this is definitely one of them!

Well, you have sequel!

shreiked 1 more mistake lol its i before the e like this: shrieked just saying. otherwise i really liked it