Hi! I read your story and I really liked it. I hope you will check out my story too, titled “Residing Dreams.” one tag for this story is residing dreams. so just type that into the search box and all of my stories will come up. I hope you enjoy my story as much as I’ve enjoyed yours. TTFN .

“Who is this guy?!” Love it!
I have never seen an episode of 24 in my life, but I’m addicted to this! It’s so engaging, so tense, so suspenseful! And to think, this is all happening in a span of four & twenty hours (pardon my archaic-ness)…
(welcome back, by the way!)

A hell of a reversal here, and a new wrinkle to the story to boot! Marcos now has two mysteries to solve. Who is the mastermind, and who is in the Caraan?