Oh what an interesting little beginning you have here. I really hope you decide to continue it. A few things, “Rags” should be Rags’ and “She just never had invited me over. And there was no particular reason why” sounds a bit strange (to me at least). I think the and doesn’t need to be there (something about the first part I just can’t put my finger on). Besides that great job, can’t wait to see where this goes :)
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