Comments on A Bit of the Old Ultra Violence(sentence challenge) by chakatreatmentson!(LoA)

.:band baby:.

ooh, i like! very nice and thanks fer entering =)
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:14.
wytherwings

great descriptions, I like it =]
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:14.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

lol, murder by fountain pen! the pen is literally mightier than the sword this time! was that your metaphorical meaning behind this? oh, and love the use of the word garrote!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:15.
Ridcully Calvert

Well done, Serb. That was very entertaining. And a bit of mindless violence is always welcome :-D
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:15.
Bartimaeus

a very grusome way to die indeed…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:15.
ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

ooooh.. you have both lines in there.. well done..
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:15.