i..i.. i’m honestly… i don’t know what to say. well i do, just not on here…
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it’s actually amazing. I can almost feel the angry inside of him, and the insanity ((for lack of a better word)) taking over. thanks fer entering!

oh my god… wow…
amazing

That is amazing and oddly disturbing. Wow. I’m on the same page as band baby…

this is very insane! It’s amazing what happens when you don’t care.

Wow.

I’m with band baby… you can feel the intense energy just emanating from this ficlet. fantastic.
LoA

Oh, and I forgot to say, the title reminds me of the song by Radiohead. Which is awesome.

yea, that song is why i chose the title

This guy clearly does not know what the hell he’s doing here, so the title is immensely appropriate….is he getting gratification out of hurting himself or destroying stuff? This is an important distinction(for me at least), cuz busting up junk is a pretty good safety valve , messing yourself up indicates some real pathology, and I’m curious to know what is going on here.

Leo, my friend, you have succeeded in making a serene person want to slam a hole in the wall. Well.. nearly serene. Almost like the story is alive. This is brilliantly done.