Comments on Never Write With a Strange Pen(sentence challenge) by Mask By The Moon

Freedom

WHOA ! That was creepy. Chills down your spine type of thing. Amazing job!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:44.
Wyatt Aapr

Wow. A very surprising ending. Nicely done.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:44.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

yeah, surprise ending! I wonder, what did she see with her new eyes before her death?
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:44.
Kermitgorf

Yikes surprised twist ending.. definalety one the darkest ficlets you’ve written, very well crafted.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:44.
chakatreatmentson!(LoA)

Damn, that was rough, I wonder what the hell she was writing like that? That some heavy stuff that gives you new eyes and kills you…eerie and evocative 5.00898734768457656 strs
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:44.
.:band baby:.

yes what…? this was really good. =) thanks fer entering!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:44.
One Time, One Chance

whoa!
hey!
where’d that come from!?
i love the ending!
spectacular, my dear.
:)
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:44.
Blusparrow

Oh my! That was amazing! That was so full of… something… that it was a lot to handle!
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:44.
Yujji

::smirks:: Yeah, definately dark and spooky. My type of story, LOVE IT ! ^-

LYL ,
Yujji
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:34:45.