This is great. Eerie and beautifully described.
Exellent collaboration on this (follow the sequel trail)
This is a really great story. There is a lot of power put into it. If it it was made into a book I would definately buy it and it’s sequal.
this was great. perfect. i absolutely love the idea of it. i love wat you could do with this story. AWESOME job with the story. AWESOME … i encourage you for tons more and more … cuz i can’t wait for more to read.
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