I like how “present tense” is one of the tags. And a while ago you told me you couldn’t write in present tense.
I think that it’s my turn to tell you that this is my most favorite thing you’ve ever written. Probably because it makes me feel like someone is stabbing me every time I read the next sequel. It’s great.

I agree with RainDance. You write so well that we can just feel all of the emotions in here.