this is a very sad ficlet…I feel for her, why don’t they like her? Was she called out of class to find out about the vehicular manslaughter, or did that happen previous to the call on the p.a., I’m somewhat confused. This is a great beginning and I think sequels would bring clarity.

I think her bravery was superficial because she ran from the room. I also think she was called from the room to go home with her aunt. Nice job.

this is good. i really like it. nice job. but the poor girl… that’s horrible to be taken from all you know… but maybe things’ll be better with her aunt and uncle?
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thanks for enteringg. =)

Very sad situation you’ve dreamed up here. Bold choice.