aw, it makes me wonder what she did. Hm. Nice use of adjectives! Did you really use the alphabet? that is awesome!
LoA

I count exactly 17 adjectives, and 6 very descriptive adverbs using 19 letters of the alphabet! See? I made you THINK !
Overall, I think you’ve created a character we pity for her shortcomings and have hope she will learn from this lesson and make better choices next time.

Hey Band B, you mind if I prequel this? After I finished reading it, and read Blu’s comment, I realized that this is without doubt the conclusion of a cliffhanger :P

Nicely done, a very serious scene, though it wound up a little funny since I read the prequel first, the one with the sneezing and all.