Nice! that is what you get for messing with Willy!
LoA

that is exactly as i picture him dressed! in the grave, as in life. :) I like the floating dagger! very quick ending for the one who yanked the skull.

You do not mess with the Bard’s head. Ever.
Nicely done!

Ouch! William strikes again! I loved the fact that he’s dressed as Romeo!

I like the comedic dialogue and Ye Olde expressions. The first line was, of course, great, and the Romeo one was good too.

Nice use of the names, lines, and set-ups from classic Shakespeare.

“Is.. Is that a dagger I see before me?,â€? I said, staring face to face with a floating bloody dagger.

XD

ya.. really good. Dressing him like Romeo was a nice touch. (at least he wasn’t dressed like Julliet – that would have been awkward)

Authentic sounding ,classic interpretation . almost like something Shakespeare would have written, macbre.. well done.

LOL @ Alro’s comment. You’re too much my friend.
Kermit, this was excellent, from the most awesome opening line, to the character names and chilling ending. Shakespeare would be proud.

Oh dear, that was scary, but really really well described. Of course, I would expect no less from u lol. Good entry!