lol :[ good one

lol :[ good one

awwwwwwwwww

Aw, this was so sad! Yet, an awesome ficlet! [=
Good job!

Bittersweet and in a word, awesome.
One minor, eensy correction: definitely is misspelled. Other than that, it’s perfect.

thank you! i fixed it!

That was so sad. Amazing job though.

amazing job!

absolutely gorgeous. This is a reason why I have such reverance for poets: the emotion that can be enstilled. I, myself, am mostly hopeless when it comes to poetry (I can write some, when it just “comes to me,” can’t be forced, y’know?).

Sad that you didn’t feel God’s presents in even the saddest moments of your life. God does not cause death and destruction and evil.. beautifully told, even though I disagree with the narrators message.

i disagree with the message to! I just felt compelled to write it!

same.. i lovee it, but disagree. but great work, the poem really makes the reader feel compassion 4 the person, its a great poem.