Funy dialouge between two friends…jake is sarcastic and Mike is self centered.

Loving the dialogue- it feels so natural, the talkative one and the thoughtful one clashing heads. Nice job.
LoA

Angsty! fairly genuine plucked from real life feel…

I agree with chakatreatmentson. In fact it sounds like one of my co-workers.

I like it, it really reminds me of real life.