Not sure of your age, but whatever stage or level you’re at, there is always room for improvement. There is something to be said for just sticking with it, but real progress comes when you apply yourself and learn from criticism or other sources (like text books).
So, by way of constructive criticism, try to cut down your sentences. Many tend to run on longer than is grammatically or aesthetically correct.

I have to agree with THX here- everyone can use a little constructive criticism. Do you think all of those famous writers out there started out being naturally amazing? No way!

Don’t let it get you down. Like THX said, there are many different sources available to improve your writing. You’re a kid, you can learn. Write away.

wow

that was touching

that was touching

thanks lol

haha jess thats so nice