This is my first short story on this website. Please by all means critique it as much as you like!
I like your sequel and congrats to you on your 1st ficlet! I am honored you chose my story to sequel, and I never cease to be amazed at the fun and interesting sequels out there. Keep up the good work and by all means continue writing!
Thank you =), I am very glad you liked my sequel.
Funny!
Thanks I aimed for laughs with this story.
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