beautifully written. 5* :D

oh wow, I can definatly relate to this. I agree, beautiful

very beautiful. and trust me. you’re spilling today!! =P

blu, blu, blu, what can I say? I love how you’ve written this, but how it makes me sad, I see a pattern, the same old circle..

I can relate too, nice poem/story. Definitely a little happy but with a strong taste of sadness left over, almost like an aftertaste. Hope it all works out!