I realy liked it! i have one critique though you shudnt have had him press a button for music you should have left them there dancing romanticly to nothing but the sound of there hearts

There should be warnings if a ficlet is a love story. ;-) PS the third sentence is screwed up.

Lovely little moment, told with all the raw affection and tenderness of a young woman. Cute and endearing. But yeah, a few typo grammar things in third and fourth paragraphs. Oh, and I disagree with pianoman, as that would have totally cross the line into cheesy land.

yes it would have pianmoman. This is much more into reality. I really love it bb.
LoA

I think I know your inspiration for this! Although it would have been more romantic, I still prefer music, personally, to give me something to think about other than my racing heart!

I just could not stop smiling when I read this =D it definitely sounds like an amazing night =)

I just could not stop smiling when I read this =D it definitely sounds like an amazing night =)

when did you right this? Definitly a combo of you liking the notebook too much and letting your imagination wander but i like it. It is so you. Blue lol