That’s a very interesting slant of a curse. Well done.

Refreshing to have someone take the less exciting path. :) I do like it! The bard has brought forth yet another tragic character in his death, the rich man who was too greedy.

I like your twist on the “curse.” Very creative.
But I especially liked these lines:
Maybe an early draft of “Romeo and Julietâ€? where they don’t die at the end. Possibly a really funny version of “Macbethâ€?.

So Shakespeare was a psychologist, as well… He knew how to mess with people’s minds! I really like your take on this!

Ana stole what I was going to say. Actually, she said pretty much everything I was going to say. So yeah. You can reread her comment and imagine my name above it.