That’s intense, man! Awesomeness! (See, it’s poetry like this that make me envious of poets. I wish I could write poetry like this on a regular basis, but I can’t. But one can’t do everything, I guess.)

I agree with g2. About the writing poetry too. AHHMAZING poem :] As always.

Both rhythmically and graphically pleasing to the reader, this poem, in a word, rocks. I love how your words run together in some lines, perfectly in keeping with your theme.

Great job! youre moving up the ficlets scale! :D

This totally reminds me of myself, lol. I feel the same way when I run!