This is awesome! I still haven’t made complete sense of it, but your constant beat and tone of voice add greatly to this!

I miss college sometimes. This is where so many of us really come of age, and this ficlet really seems to capture that cusp of someone finally beginning to sense their potential.

I echo Oreos… I haven’t quite “got it” yet, but that may be because it’s 7 in the morning and my brain isn’t fully functional yet.
Dispite that, this is beautifully written!