For an explosion, you told this story calmly! You used your adjectives well. You found some good ones! I haven’t counted them yet, I have too much to do, but I will! :P

Last sentence is a real zinger, Maiden ;) I can definitely tell that adjectives was the focus of this piece, but they weren’t overbearing in the least; also, the story line is perfectly suited for this kind of typing.

“My love for Trixie burns with the intensity of a thousand suns!”
Not sure if you made the reference to Fairly OddParents on purpose. Wow, that was one of my favorite shows as a kid. You know, as a younger kid.
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Anyway. I like how your story didn’t get lost in strained adjectives. Nice job.

@Stovohobo: Haha, no, I didn’t make a reference…I don’t even know what that show is. XD I ’ve watched it only a few times. : )