Very graphic, and scary. Maybe I’ll start wearing my helmet.

Good sequel. I like your name choice and i thought your lead up to his going unconscious was witty :)

I think I agree with Wyatt. Nice job sequeling!

I like blossom’s point, they way you lead up to his unconciousness was extremely witty. good sequel

Yes, the conciousness thing struck me as funny.

I’m a little confused, though. You changed from third person to first in the same ficlet.

ha! good point, Fae! I was just in the moment and missed that!