Good continuation. Was this all in a dream? Will he ride again? What now.

Nice details about family members ;) they pointed out over the grand canyon? o.o I wonder if he can fly! :P Third paragraph, second sentence: small typo.

fixed it! I missed that! thanks!

And…..done :) I put a nice little twist in here

Hmm… A lot to ponder in this one. It shows his depth as a character, me thinks.

Oooh. Nice psychology. The clarification of where he’s coming from is nice.