Comments on Sometimes You Hold So Tight, It Slips Right Through Your Hands by Blusparrow

Blusparrow

Title from “I Can’t You Anymore” by Nick Lachey
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:46:20.
.:band baby:.

awee, this is cute yet sad too. =( but beautifully written.!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:46:20.
Blossom Ruoquen

These are truly beautiful words, but I don’t see any structure to you’re poem. They’re moving words, but the beat and flow change from stanza to stanza.
oh, and I just read your profile. Those, m’dear, are the Best quotes I’ve heard all month! VIVA LA DU JOKER !
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:46:20.