Whoa! Totally freaky in an awesome way! Way to go! And I’m guessing this is your first ficlet. Good job on your very first one! :D And welcome.

Suspenseful and eerie.. you kept up the pace of the suspence throughout.

Good job with the descriptions and repetition. And if this is your first ficlet, welcome – and kudos for figuring out the ficlets format so fast. =)

Good writing, and well thought out descriptions. Nice hook at the end.

haha thing is, this actually happened to me. Except for the fact that the pocketknife was a little toy plastic knife. Still creepy. And I’ve had that dream over and over again; no knife when i wake up though, I threw that toy away!!

Creepy! I love the repitition… it just adds to the mood. Great job and welcome to Ficlets!
LoA