Nice little ficlet, but it could stand to be proof read.

I like it very much it deserves a part two!

I edited this from what Wyatt had told me in private comments. He made a few suggestions, which I, in turn used, because he’s prolly a better writer than myself. So Thanks WA!!!!!! lol. and I’ll start on the sequel…..unless someone wants to help me?? ;) ;) ….private note me about doing a series together. :)

mm indeed it does deserve a sequel =)

good start…..imma workin on it…..

good start…..imma workin on it…..

ooh, intriguing. can’t wait to find out wha happens next. =)

wow! i loved this ficlet! it was so well written, and unique because and talks about kings and what not. i hope you sequel, or someone does. you gave the character emma real depth and description. nice job. even tho ficlets will be going away soon, i want to encourage everyone to keep writing as much as they can. none of us will ever forget this site.

It would make my day if you read my ficlet, titled “Residing Dreams.” It has many chapters, and it is coming along quite nicely. One tag for it is residing dreams. So just type that into the search box and all of my stories will come up. Don’t forget to leave a comment! I hope you enjoy my story as I have enjoyed yours. Happy Ficleting! TTFN .