Nice, but maybe u could tighten things up a bit by eliminating the “then”s in the second paragraph.

mmm very nice and sweet =)

haha you like writing lovey dovey stuf dont ya? well i like it

sappy.
I love it! I love that she’s wearing his shirt, and she’s happy to make him breakfast even if it is toaster waffles..

lol. You do like lovey dovey stuff. Very cute little scene here.