woah… needs to know what? and why are they so scared?! what is he going to do to them!?? very nice suspense!

hmm.. an eerie feeling…
for sum reason, it sounds sort of edgar allen poe-ish…

Very mysterious… I’m pondering the questions that BandBaby mentioned… But very well done.
(See? I told you that you can write prose!)

AHH !! Intense. Please tell me this is a series. Please please please.